Writing Poetry posted May 1, 2025


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Years later we think the punishment was worth it.

The Dry Ice Experiement

by HarryT

 
Walking through the alley behind a store dock
We spotted some white pebbles smoking hot
I picked up one up, held it then dropped it quick
Dock guy said, hold it long you’ll get burn sick
 
We thought it would be fun to take some home
Drop them in liquids, they splattered and foamed 
Jim got an idea to tease Sister’s special pet girls
We formed an inkwell plan, so the plot unfurls
 
Early before school began, we took our chance
Snuck into school with a self-confident prance
With dry ice in a gym bag, our plan was in play
We had to plant the ice before the start of the day
 
The pets would come early with uniforms neat
The Marys’ to perform their inkwell filling feat
They sashayed about filling the inkwells so proud
Suddenly, the dollies screamed incredibly loud
 
Rising from the wells came a gurgling sound
Blue ink spurting wildly, girls spinning around
Their blouses once white, now polka dotting blue
The girls screaming and dancing a twisting milieu
 
From the cloakroom, we giggled with much glee
Never expecting such a rollicking sight to see
In came Sister, a ruler-lashing we’ll not forget
Years later we laugh about it without any regret

 



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