General Poetry posted March 10, 2025


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A tribute to our baby girl.

Face of an Angel

by davisr (Rhonda)

 
 
Devil
evil, selfish
abandon, abuse, neglect
drugs, violence, kindness, maturity
restore, rebuild
Angel
 
 
 
A darling girl, just 6 weeks old,
was placed in my care, her heart to enfold,
her mother would come and eventually go,
mostly to drugs, jail and rampant ego.
A tool to get what she wanted from us,
a helpless victim, a cherished one plus,
Now a judge decreed she is our dear child,
the one who loves all and cares and beguiles,
A road still ahead as we all try to make sense,
But thank God in Heaven she is Heaven sent.
 



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March
2025


As many of you may know, my husband and I have been raising a grandchild, Kylie, since she was 6 weeks old. The mother came and went and would often use her as a way to manipulate us into doing what she wanted. This often put Kylie in dangerous situations around the most vile people.

Recently, mom went to jail and we applied for permanent custody. It was granted today after over a year of waiting.

Wayne and I understand the enormity of the challenge and responsibility of raising a child whose mom is still a family member, and at our age.

Still, it was the right thing to do!

Thanks for all your love and support.

Speaking to the poetic form, the first is a diamante, the second??? It was from the heart.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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