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A sleeper agent who has fallen asleep - now jolted awake.
Unlocked
by Gant Laborde

UNLOCKED
Written by Gant Laborde
A sleeper agent who’s fallen asleep - now jolted awake to ponder the burning question, “What’s the shelf-life of an oath?”
EXT. SUBURBAN NEIGHBORHOOD – COLD MORNING
A quiet morning in everyday suburban America. DENIS (late 30s) steps into his kitchen. He pours coffee and prepares breakfast for his daughter JESSIE (pre-teen). DENIS gazes out the window.
RACK FOCUS TO CAR ANTENNA:
He spots a BLACK RIBBON tied to his car’s antenna.
RACK FOCUS BACK TO DENIS:
His face falls into a look of deep distress.
INT. KITCHEN – CONTINUOUS
DENIS sets the breakfast on the table. He calls JESSIE, who is busy with her homework.
DENIS
Breakfast is ready!
JESSIE
Whipped cream pancakes?
DENIS places pancakes on the table with a happy face painted in whipped cream.
DENIS
Hey, do you want to go to Airline Skate Center today?
JESSIE
Weren’t we going to work on my science project?
DENIS
We’ll do that later.
JESSIE
But I’m too old for skating.
DENIS grins playfully.
DENIS
I’m too old for it too. Come on, it’ll be fun!
You never know if I’m going to fall on my face.
Her expression remains unimpressed. He softens his tone.
DENIS (CONT’D)
And—how about you get to see that movie with your
friends later?
JESSIE
Yeah?
Hope brightens his eyes; he needs this outing badly.
DENIS
You got it, Lovebug!
JESSIE
Dad! Don’t call me that.
DENIS laughs, but when JESSIE turns away, his smile disappears.
EXT. DRIVEWAY – MOMENTS LATER
They load into the car. As they settle in, JESSIE looks at him curiously.
JESSIE
How long are we going to skate?
DENIS
Not long. Just a short trip with your old man.
That okay, Lovebug?
JESSIE smiles, pleased.
EXT. AIRLINE SKATE CENTER – LATER
They arrive at the skate center. Oversized signs proclaim “CASH ONLY” and “NO CREDIT CARDS.” They pay and step inside.
INT. SKATE CENTER – LOCKER WALL – CONTINUOUS
Rows of lockers line the room. DENIS gestures to JESSIE.
DENIS
Pick a locker, love.
JESSIE
Not again!
DENIS
You know the game!
JESSIE
Why can’t we use the same one as last time?
There aren’t that many people.
DENIS
It’s our tradition.
She walks up and grabs the first locker. DENIS shakes his head.
DENIS (CONT’D)
Uh-uh! You chose that one before.
Rolling her eyes, she opts for the locker next to it and turns for approval.
JESSIE
How’s this?
DENIS
Excellent choice.
He feeds a five-dollar bill into the machine and selects Locker 36. The locker clicks open. Jessie places her shoes inside.
DENIS (CONT’D)
Go warm up—I want a race.
JESSIE runs off. Alone, DENIS lingers by locker 36. He looks around and then crouches to read the inside top of the locker. His eyes trace the printed words: “Orange/Stethoscope/Valentine.” With a somber expression, he slips his jacket into the locker, then discreetly checks for the hidden gun he has tucked. He scans the room again and then exits.
INT. SKATE CENTER – SKATE RINK AREA – CONTINUOUS
DENIS moves to a counter where a SKATE ATTENDANT awaits.
DENIS
(quietly)
Hey, I know this is going to sound strange,
but you got any orange skates?
The SKATE ATTENDANT puzzled, shrugs.
SKATE ATTENDANT
What size?
DENIS
Twelve
The YOUNG MAN returns with the right size skates.
SKATE ATTENDANT
They’re kinda orange.
DENIS
That works.
David looks around while walking. He sees the concession counter, and he changes his direction. He approaches the concession counter.
DENIS
Hey, you’ve got a lot of flavors.
(beat)
Do you serve Orange Julias?
A YOUNG WOMAN behind the counter shakes her head.
YOUNG WOMAN
No.
DENIS
Thanks.
He wanders through the rink, looking anxious. A low, pulsing hum grows louder. He watches JESSIE laughing and skating alongside a slightly OLDER GIRL.
INT. SKATE RINK – BENCH AREA – CONTINUOUS
The spot that was empty before now has A WOMAN seated beside him. Her voice breaks through the ambient hum.
WOMAN (O.S.)
Aren’t kids the cutest?
Lost in thought, DENIS is startled as the rink’s ambient sounds swell back in as the hum fades
DENIS
Yeah… she’s amazing.
WOMAN
Is that your daughter? I think she’s making
friends with mine.
DENIS
Yeah.
A pause. Softly, he adds:
DENIS (CONT’D)
She used to dress up. I guess she’s finally
growing out of neon orange every time we go skating.
WOMAN
They grow up so fast. My daughter used to dress
in costumes, too. One year, she was a doctor, skating
with a stethoscope and everything.
FLASH CUT TO THE TEXT FROM THE LOCKER: Orange/Stethoscope/Valentine
DENIS freezes. His voice drops.
DENIS
I feel ya. Last time she got dressed up was
for a daddy-daughter Valentine’s Day date.
The WOMAN smiles wanly.
WOMAN
Regardless of the outfit, I’d love to have you
over some time. Our kids mesh so well—I can be
your newest contact.
DENIS nods understandingly. They both speak without making eye contact.
DENIS
I... had a playdate contact in my phone. I don’t
know what happened to him.
WOMAN
Don’t cling to the past. Our daughters are having
a wonderful time. I’ll be your new contact now.
DENIS clenches his jaw.
DENIS
What happened to Henry?
Anger flashes across her face.
WOMAN
Who?
DENIS
It’s just… the past twenty-three years—never mind.
WOMAN
It’s our JOB to focus on our plan for the future.
(glancing around)
And the future starts right now.
DENIS nods – sadness in his eyes.
After a beat, the WOMAN leans in, speaking in perfect Russian.
WOMAN (in Russian)
ÐÂкÑÂивиÑÂоваÑÂÑ ÑÂÑÂбÑÂ-меÑÂÂÂ
DENIS’ eyes widen.
DENIS
Are you serious?
WOMAN
As a heart attack.
DENIS
But why now? The Federation hasn’t sent
word in-
Her expression turns flustered.
WOMAN
Look, all you need to know is—it’s time.
DENIS
I understand.
WOMAN
Think of your daughter. You don’t want to end
up like Henry, do you?
DENIS’ gaze hardens.
DENIS (in Russian)
Ð"де моÑ ÑÂелÑÂ?
WOMAN
No more mother tongue—
(glancing around)
And its targets. Plural
DENIS
I don’t know if I can do more than one today…
He hesitates as she fixes him a piercing glare.
WOMAN
Lucky for you, your first one is close. The stall
in the men’s bathroom is shut for renovation.
DENIS
Here?
WOMAN (CONT’D)
Here’s my number.
(she hands him a card)
Today is going to be a glorious day.
She stands and calls out in a stern voice:
WOMAN (CONT’D)
Sasha!
The OLDER GIRL skating with JESSIE breaks from her smile and glides toward the WOMAN. JESSIE stares confused. WOMAN and OLDER GIRL leave.
JESSIE approaches the DENIS. She appears sad.
JESSIE
I want to go home.
DENIS
I haven’t gotten my skates on yet.
(beat)
We can go. I just need to use the restroom
really quick, Lovebug.
JESSIE
Can’t it wait? The bathrooms are disgusting.
DENIS
I’ll be quick!
INT. RESTROOM – CONTINUOUS
DENIS enters an empty restroom. The last stall is taped off. He pulls out a knife, cuts through the tape, and enters. Inside, he finds a BOX marked “BROKEN.” He reluctantly opens it and sighs. He methodically assembles a nerve agent. His face is etched with sadness. He punches in a long code to arm the device.
INT. SKATE RINK – MOMENTS LATER
DENIS exits the restroom. Across the rink, he sees JESSIE laughing with one of her friends. The FRIEND greets him.
FRIEND
Hey, Mr. White!
DENIS
(softly)
Time to go.
JESSIE hesitates.
JESSIE
I want to stay.... You still haven’t
skated Dad!
A pair of PARENTS nearby chime in.
PARENT
Hey Denis! We just got here.
JESSIE
Dad said I can go to the movie later!
Denis avoids eye contact and looks down. He’s disturbed.
DENIS
We have to go.
PARENT
If you need to go, we’ll keep an eye on them.
We can drop her off after.
DENIS
We have to go now!
DENIS grabs JESSIE by the arm.
JESSIE
You’re hurting me!
They storm out. Onlookers gawk and gasp at the sight.
EXT. PARKING LOT – CONTINUOUS
JESSIE bursts into tears. DENIS’ pent-up emotions explode.
DENIS
(yelling)
It’s time to grow up! When I say we have
to go, we have to go.
JESSIE
You didn’t even return your skates! What is
happening? Why are you like this?
DENIS
There comes a time when life gets hard, Lovebug.
You need to be tough.
JESSIE
Don’t you fucking call me that!
DENIS is taken aback.
JESSIE
You want tough? You’re being an asshole.
You’re ruining this day.
She stands defiant, meeting his gaze.
JESSIE (CONT’D)
I don’t know why you’re acting like this,
but you’re wrong!
DENIS (CONT’D)
Look, this day is ruined, whether I ruin it or not.
That’s life. But don’t talk to your father like that.
You’re going to need me. You’re going to need
to be like me.
JESSIE
I don’t need this! And I’m never going to be like you.
(through tears)
I’m going to have a family that loves me.
They won’t hate me. I won’t hurt them.
(softly)
And if no one hurts you, then no one has to fight.
DENIS stares as tears well in his eyes.
DENIS
Honey.
(beat)
Sometimes... there’s no choice.
JESSIE
That’s not my dad talking.
He chokes on his words.
DENIS
You -
DENIS stares back and forth between the building and JESSIE several times. Finally, he settles on his daughter's eyes. He opens his arms.
DENIS (CONT’D)
You’re right.
JESSIE clings to him, crying softly.
His heart shatters. He manages a weak smile.
DENIS (CONT’D)
Sometimes, being strong isn’t doing what
you’re told, Lovebug.
(beat)
You’re so much better than me. You’re everything
that’s right in the world.
JESSIE looks up at her father.
INT. SKATE CENTER –
SLOW MOTION SHOT:
DENIS walks into the skate center’s entrance—torn between a life of cold and the warm love of his daughter. He knows that pulling the fire alarm will brand him a traitor, igniting a chain reaction that could cost him everything.
DENIS (V.O.)
My daughter’s grown up so much. I think it’s
time I did, too. I know this means we’re anything
but safe, but -
With trembling hands, he reaches for the FIRE ALARM and pulls it.
DENIS (V.O.)
-today, I will do my part, not for my country
but for my family.
SLOW MOTION SHOT ENDS:
EXT. SKATE CENTER – CHAOS – MOMENTS LATER
Sirens wail. Panic erupts as people exit to safety. Amid the chaos, DENIS watches, his face a blend of resolve and sadness. He walks towards the police, his hands in the air.
In the distance, his daughter is held by the PARENTS of her FRIEND. Her concerned look tells him that, for once, he made the right decision.
He smiles back.
DENIS (V.O.)
We always have a choice, Lovebug.
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