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Please read this work slow, orderly and freely


Ray = sun ray; sunray; sunrays


Poetic licence used in expression of meaning, use of words, expression of words, style and art of expression


Lesser punctuation is intentional


This is an independent chapter 14 of the book


This has 5-7-5-7-5-7-7-7 syllables in my own styles, three phases of thoughts expressed in 8 lines:
Action (sunray), Activation (sunray in time), and Fruition (sunray graces lives)


Enjoy extreme metaphoric use in the work


This is a free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-5-7-7-7 syllables in my art and style of expression; no, this is not a free verse poem contest entry


Picture borrowed free download from internet


This is an imaginary, visionary and visualized poem framed in my vision on and about sunrays, gift from God, grace, sun ray, sun light, light for life, how is life on or upon or at sun ray or sunrays


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This Book of Poetry O My God has poems on and about Nature and Infinite Creations of God and Gifts of God


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