Romance Poetry posted February 18, 2025


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A long ago love.

Eventide

by Regina Elliott

I ask of the night why it slips into my
bedroom and extinguishes Earth's
light,
He replied softly, 
"I'm a jealous lover and my shade
of evening lies down beside you,
as we bid the augustness of the
sun adieu."
 
I laugh and weep at the same time,
as I'm in love with the four season's
soirees he enchants my heart with.
Many years ago, walking slowly
hand in hand with my lifeguard
lover on the sands of Fire Island,
I thought love's charms would last,
his fire with starlight,
jewels of moonlight and kisses-
with summer's wane he faded
into September's wooing embrace.
 
Yet, glorious eventide was always
there,
and as he filled my eyes with the
swallow's flight,
he whispered breathlessly,
"You are mine to keep." ~



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