Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 21, 2025 |
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the promise of heaven...and heaven lost
Floating Through Eden
by Me and Erin G
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I had these few lines that were written a few months ago. Which I thought could lead to something:
"I am astounded by its beauty,
Its peacefulness, its perfection
the scene is a heaven.
But there is no one here."
Then I read an article on NDEs (near death experiences) and somehow it evolved into this
Pays
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and 2 member cents. "I am astounded by its beauty,
Its peacefulness, its perfection
the scene is a heaven.
But there is no one here."
Then I read an article on NDEs (near death experiences) and somehow it evolved into this





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