Romance Poetry posted December 18, 2024 |
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of love and lovers...
Nocturnes
by estory
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I have to say I consider this poem to be among my best. The couplet construction through most of it speaks to the elements of attraction as well as the separations between lovers. The transcendent imagery I think could be some of my best. I think it captures the sense of seduction, mystery, and the delicate trust, the pull and push of attraction. And in the last stanza there is this sense that love is a transitory moment, something we can't quite hold in our hands, no matter how much we try to grasp it. There is a side to our lovers we can never quite know, never quite own. Therein is the joys and pains of love. In some ways it doesn't quite fit with the theme of Ruin in this collection, but I felt that because of the romantic imperfection of the moments described here, it might lend itself after all. estory
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