General Poetry posted August 12, 2006 | Chapters: | ...10 11 -12- 13... |
They forget your coming, going n' you see we live!
A chapter in the book O My God and Mother Nature!
Ol' Wave!
by Alcreator Litt Dear
Old wave devastate but man lives...in 5-7-5-7-5-7-7-7
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Background (Edited)* This Book of Poetry O My God has poems on and about Nature and Infinite Creations of God and Gifts of God Ho! Back, you strike men! High water, dark stone, lash homes! Lock links, drown day long! Marooned hearts cry help for hours. Calm! Now, see day light. Saved pop re-breathe, off shore; how faiths find sunshine, glow, sprout genes. Lives smile fading ol' dark days. |
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ol' = old; Ol = Old
pop = people; men
marooned hearts = marooned people; marooned pop or hearts;
pop re-breathe = men now alive; men now safe; men now free from devastation
man includes woman
n' = and
Pop = population; people
Punctuation intentional
This is a free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-5-7-7-7 Syllables, free of uniform rhymes, free of meters, not a free verse contest entry, in my own style and expression, in three phases of thoughts expressed in 8 lines:
Action
Activation
Fruition
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Please read this work slow, orderly and freely
Poetic licence used in expression of meaning, style and art of expression
Lesser punctuation is intentional
This is an independent chapter 12 of the book
Enjoy extreme metaphoric use in the work
ol' = old; Ol = Old
pop = people; men
marooned hearts = marooned people; marooned pop or hearts;
pop re-breathe = men now alive; men now safe; men now free from devastation
man includes woman
n' = and
Pop = population; people
Punctuation intentional
This is a free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-5-7-7-7 Syllables, free of uniform rhymes, free of meters, not a free verse contest entry, in my own style and expression, in three phases of thoughts expressed in 8 lines:
Action
Activation
Fruition
Picture borrowed free download from internet
*Background is incomplete, FS did not provide adequate space; now I am unable to access, I will change replacing the incomplete background with edited Background (as shown); I am sorry for the inconvenience
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