General Poetry posted August 12, 2006 Chapters:  ...10 11 -12- 13... 


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They forget your coming, going n' you see we live!

A chapter in the book O My God and Mother Nature!

Ol' Wave!

by Alcreator Litt Dear


Old wave devastate but man lives...in 5-7-5-7-5-7-7-7 The author has placed a warning on this post for language.


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This Book of Poetry -- Nature and God's Infinite Creations in Appreciation contains poems in different structures. It discovers, opens, expresses infinite diversities of Nature, God Gifts to man and

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This Book of Poetry O My God has poems on and about Nature and Infinite Creations of God and Gifts of God








Ho! Back, you strike men!
High water, dark stone, lash homes!
Lock links, drown day long!
Marooned hearts cry help for hours.
Calm! Now, see day light.
Saved pop re-breathe, off shore; how
faiths find sunshine, glow, sprout genes.
Lives smile fading ol' dark days.










 



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Enjoy extreme metaphoric use in the work

ol' = old; Ol = Old


pop = people; men

marooned hearts = marooned people; marooned pop or hearts;


pop re-breathe = men now alive; men now safe; men now free from devastation


man includes woman


n' = and


Pop = population; people


Punctuation intentional


This is a free verse poem in 5-7-5-7-5-7-7-7 Syllables, free of uniform rhymes, free of meters, not a free verse contest entry, in my own style and expression, in three phases of thoughts expressed in 8 lines:
Action
Activation
Fruition


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