General Poetry posted October 15, 2024


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Still trying to create myself

Still Searching

by Todd Bourgeois

I left bread crumbs
back to the shore of
the place where I thought
I could return and 
cook words over a fire.
But the birds ate
my map.
So, I wandered in the
forest of middle age,
thinking I was still young
enough to run,
but too old to relate.
My friends have all grown,
but I am not left here alone.
I look for a place to 
lay my head and call
this "ME".
Little cabins in the
woods,
half built and abandoned.
Projects started and
never finished.
Only ever to find
a place that was mine.
Yet, still I search
after all this time.
 



Free Verse Poem contest entry


Playing the comparison game at middle age is not a recipe for positive mental health. This was a tough write.
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