General Poetry posted March 1, 2024


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Broken heart got me into poems.

Breaking point

by derek campbell

The author has placed a warning on this post for language.
Breaking up is the worst,
So heart broken,
I took the pen as a token,
To write down everything that shouldn't be spoken,
 
Her painful ways,
Drove me and the kids insane, 
To this day I'm still not okay.
 
The wall took a break,
when I wrote about the mistakes, 
And all the hate and fake love
from the man up above,
Who knew what was at stake.
 
All the anger in me ,
the paper was the only thing I could see,
It controlled the emotions in me,
The fake mother she was,
who made us suffer,
with no love,
for that I discovered words,
the under-covered calmness with just a flick of the wrist and that's it and now I'm golden tits with words that hopefully make me win this. 
 
 
 
 



My Muse writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem, any length, about your muse. Who or what inspires you to write?

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