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Senryu Suite
A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes
~ In The Dark ~
by Gypsy Blue Rose
Fiction - 17 syllables or less - 3 title - 6/4/4 - 4/5/5 - 4/5/7 - 5/6/6 - 5/5/3 - ending 3
In the Dark
I'm back at our cafe looking for you but you're not there the sun shines on but all I can see are dark clouds afar when I find you you're with Delilah so I stay back midst the crowd watching you kiss her my lips burn and I try but I can't let you go you're taking her home and you don't see me standing here In the Dark
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Fiction - Senryu Suite 17 syllables or Less
SENRYU is a Japanese poetic form similar to haiku. It's written in 3 lines with 17 syllables OR LESS usually in a shot/long/short form. Senryu is about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature. Senryu doesn't need a season word (kigo) but it's okay if you do. It never rhymes. It uses imagery.
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
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and 2 member cents. SENRYU is a Japanese poetic form similar to haiku. It's written in 3 lines with 17 syllables OR LESS usually in a shot/long/short form. Senryu is about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature. Senryu doesn't need a season word (kigo) but it's okay if you do. It never rhymes. It uses imagery.
for more information click here
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
pictures from pinterest.com
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