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JIYU-SHI poem for the Japanese Poetic Club

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Harbor Gray Morning

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
harbor gray morning
cooled by southern salty sea
stirred sorrowful blues
of pain that won't go away
so I prayed for hope
   and a sign that I am loved —
a breeze caressed me
while the high tide kissed my toes
 
 
 
 




Jiyu-Shi poem consists of a combination of 5/7 syllables stanzas. You may write as many stanzas as you like and any topic. It never rhymes. The two 5/7 stanza lines are connected grammatically.

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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. It's an entry for this week's challenge for the Japanese Poetry Club. Everyone is welcome to join.

Gypsy hugs

Club entry for the "JIYU-SHI POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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