General Fiction posted May 24, 2023

Love at first sight and eyes can flirt

Eyes can talk

by Goodadvicechan

Looking through the window of a health pharmacy, Tom saw no medicines but a young girl, standing by the register counter, with her round entrancing eyes, teasing romantically and trying to flirt with him.

As soon as Tom entered the shop, she immediately walked with a springy step, swaying from side to side, towards him, saying. "Handsome, what do you want to buy today?"

Tom flirted, "Am I really handsome?"

"Sorry, I am addressing my boyfriend, the one behind you."

80 Word Flash Fiction contest entry


Love at first sight may not be real. Connection and attraction can be real. Eyes can deliver messages.
Pays 10 points and 1.01 member dollars.

Artwork by Linda Bickston at

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