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Jiyu-shi Poem for the Japanese Poetry Club

A chapter in the book Tanka Collection

Riding the Sea Breeze

by Gypsy Blue Rose

If You Would Like To Join the Japanese Poetry Club, please check my author notes The author has placed a warning on this post for sexual content.
Old Spice rides sea breeze

      entwined in musk sandalwood

allures my heart

      and stirs tempestuous lust

yearning for your touch

      my body leaning towards yours

millennium dance

      making love with you at dusk


Jiyu-shi is a modern Japanese free-style poetic form developed in Japan in the 19th century. The form consists of 5/7 stanza, you may write one or more stanzas = source

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