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Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7
A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes
Deep Deep Inside
by Gypsy Blue Rose
Deep deep inside me,
burning memories erupt
melting safety walls.
Some say it has been too long
to still grieve your loss,
but a bursting torrential
pain surfaces fast
to rivers of fire and blood
rushing to the crimson sea.
CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine lines in a 5/7 /5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, CHOKA was written in 100 sets. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HEREPays one point and 2 member cents.
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