General Poetry posted March 7, 2023


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He'll find your lack of treats disturbing

Vader

by Jessica Wheeler


Dark side, dog is on
Loyal and loving Vader
With him, force is strong



5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 poem on a loved one (animal)

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Line's 1 and 3 were intentionally written that way (in case the structure seems odd) in attempts to imitate Yoda's unique dialect.
Also, yes, that is the real Vader.
And, yes, he IS that handsome.

May the force be with you.
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