General Poetry posted February 8, 2023


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Octelle

Balloons

by Sanku

Multihued joy,we fly aloft
Flitting birds,we try to accost.

Hot-aired we lug humans
thrill them with our acumen.

If we snoop causing bedlam
then we are quite unwelcome.

Multihued joy ,we fly aloft
flitting birds,we try to accost.

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