General Script posted February 2, 2023


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Flakes In My Time

I Have Met To Many

by country ranch writer


Jane talked to Jessie while they waited for their orders before going out on patrol.
Jane
[ says to Jessie her best friend and ranger.]

She turns and looks at Jessie
Do you think Dan is a flake?


Jessie
You want my honest opinion?

Jane

Yes, I do. Is he dependable?


Jessie


Let's put it this way if he says he will pick you up at eight I wouldn't hold my breath.

Jane

Boy! Another flake!

Jessie
You really know how to pick them!




Fade out!





I've Met Too Many Flakes contest entry


Jane :Texas ranger
Jessie: Janes best friend and a Texas ranger
Dan: A real piece if crap, real born and breed flake. Always making promises and never keeping them, always had an excuse for his actions.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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