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8/8/8/8 Four Line Poem

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Drizzle Covered Grave

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Dedicated to Helen (Lyenochka)
 
 
 
by her dad's drizzle covered grave,

crisp ripples of wild winter wind

dance with the tousled white-mist hair

and in her umber eyes ...  thunder
 
 
 




Four Lines poems have eight syllables in each line. I like to connect them grammaticaly and mine never rhyme.

Thank you very much for your time and kind review,

Gypsy Sensei
Word Weaver and Graphic Artist

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