General Poetry posted December 12, 2022


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What Makes Me Cry

by Jim Wile

 
I never cry at movies, plays, or books, or TV shows,
Or even at the real-life loss of people that I know.
It’s just so strange I have this dearth, this inability.
It surely seems to demonstrate a lack of empathy.

There is one thing that brings it out, surprising though it seems.
It’s writing fiction where my characters, in made-up scenes,
Experience emotions that will move me to the core.
I’ll cry as I am writing them, and down my face will pour…

Such tears that they will cease to stop until the scene is through,
And when I try to read it back, begin again anew.
It’s writing that provides me with an outlet for these tears
And proves to me that I am not the soulless beast I feared.
 



Feelings Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Emotions have overcome us all at one time or another. It could be from someone that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Write a poem that expresses feelings and emotions such as anger or depression. Any type of poem is welcomed.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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