Humor Poetry posted November 14, 2022


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The woes of driving home from work!

Rush Hour

by Douglas Goff

Rhyming Contest Contest Winner 

oh me oh my

the cars fly by

oh bother oh brother

here comes another

 

oh wait . . . what now

we’re stopping some how

accident or construction

what manner of destruction

 

cut in cut out, we move at a crawl

I pound on my knees, my hands in a ball

should I scream and shout

or just sit here and pout

 

is that a pothole that just rattled my teeth

don’t they know or see how badly I seethe

finally, we are moving, I sigh and I groan, followed with a slight moan

the driver states firmly, you’re the worst passenger I’ve ever known



Writing Prompt
Please write three to five stanzas, rhyme at least every other line.

Rhyming Contest
Contest Winner
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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