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Romantic Sijo Korean Poem

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Her Mouth As Souvenir

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

Recess bell  

comes too soon 

like wind chimes  

blowing in the breeze.  

 

My heart beats  

to the beat of his heart  

holding  “Her Mouth As Souvenir”  

tangled in old spice  

teaching me life lessons –    

my first heartthrob.

 

 




Fiction Poem is about a Literature teacher and a young girl's infatuation

"Her Mouth as Souvenir" by Heather June Gibbons, is a collection of poems book.

SIJO poem is a traditional Korean poetic form related to haiku and tanka. Traditionally, a Sijo is comprised of 44-46 syllables OR LESS. Originally intended as songs, sijo can be a romantic, metaphysical, reflection, or spiritual themes. Whatever the subject, the first line introduces an idea or story, the second supplies a "turn," and the third provides closure. The pattern is not strict but it has to be 46 syllables o less. Theme 3,4,4,4 = 1st stanza/Elaboration 3,4,4,4 = 2nd stanza/Counter Theme 3,5. 3rd stanza/Completion 4,3 = 4th stanza Sijo Form Definition

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