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A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

In Warm Summer Breeze

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

in warm summer breeze 

water moon floats to my shore —

slides through my fingers 

 

 



5-7-5 Poem contest entry


Water Moon is an East Asian proverb/phrase, meaning something that can be seen but not touched, like the moon reflected on the water's surface; something that is beautiful but unattainable dreams, a mirage.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"A sunset is the sun's fiery kiss to the night." -Crystal Woods
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