General Poetry posted July 16, 2022


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senyru (daddy was broken)

by Val Crisson

daddy was broken
by war, loss, and alcohol
yet, he left me love



Senryu You! writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 Senryu dedicated to a person, place or thing. Here's a chance for you to praise your favorite food, or honor a loved one! Have fun!


This was a difficult senyru for me write, because he was "my daddy." Also, his love was unconditional, though he had so many problems.
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