General Poetry posted April 22, 2022 Chapters:  ...37 39 -40- 41... 


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4/4/3 Senryu

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

After He Left

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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walks on our beach
after you left —

breaking waves

 




SENRYU is a Japanese form of short poetry similar to haiku is written in 3 lines with 17 syllables OR LESS in a shot/long/short form. Senryu tends to be about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature. Senryu doesn't include a kigo (season word).

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collection of senryu

The Haiku Foundation of America

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Gypsy
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