General Fiction posted April 1, 2022


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When an April Fool's Prank goes wrong

Too Far pt. 2(the conclusion)

by the13thpoet

April F***s! Contest Winner 
The author has placed a warning on this post for language.
The author has placed a warning on this post for sexual content.

The two of them continued to lay there holding each other, breathing heavily and covered in sweat and guilt. Their eyes met and locked on each other. "What just happened?" They asked in unison. No one answered but they continued to stare at each other, each one wondering what was going on in the mind of the other. It was Abby who broke the gaze. She lifted her hand and looked at the engagement ring again. A three karat Diamond, Gabby (her twin) was going to be so jealous she thought.

"I just had the most amazing sex with the most beautiful woman in the world." Brian finally spoke breaking the silence.

"And who exactly is the most beautiful woman in the world?" She curiously questioned

"Why it's you Abby of course." He told her with the most confidence and pride he could muster up.

"UHH excuse me? Abby? I don't think so....why don't you give it another try big boy" She responded devilishly. "I'll give you one more try and forget your first answer since....you know we look so much alike."

Brian face turned pale white, he jumped up, he had knots in his stomach, he could feel the bile rising in his throat. "No No No, this can't be happening."

"I think you mean happened don't you?" She evilly interrupted.

"Please tell me you're fucking with me.....right?" He pleaded. "Abby please!" His desperation was palpable.

"I really wish you wouldn't call me that."

He tried to clear his head, he started replaying everything. "Ah ha! I know it's you Abby, the the the knee...." He finally managed to get out through his newfound confidence and excitement, referencing the scar Gabby (her identical twin) had on her knee, the only distinguishable mark that allowed people to tell the two of them apart. "Nice try."

"Oh that unsightly scar? I got plastic surgery to get rid of that thing a couple of months ago. With summer coming up I decided I didn't want that scar ruining my beach selfies anymore."

"Oh Shit! Fuck! I think I'm gonna be sick!" He shouted as he ran to the bathroom and slammed the door, nearly tripping over her pair of Louboutin shoes that were in the middle of the floor. "Shit Fuck, Goddamn shoes."

Abby got up and stood by the bathroom door listening. She was covering mouth with her hand trying hard to hold back the laughter. She could hear him cursing and rambling on about shoes, shortly followed by grunts, labored breathing and splashing. He was shitting, did I literally scare the shit out of him she thought. Abby could no longer hold in the laughter. "You ok in there big boy?" She asked in between laughs.

"Does it sound like I'm ok?" He replied angrily and embarrassingly.

"Aww I'm sorry....what's the matter?" She faked concern.

"How could you do this to me?" He pleaded.

"How could you do this to me?" She clapped back "Give a girl the best sex of her life, then go running off and shit up the place. You're quite the Casanova, aren't you?" She teased through her continued laughter.

"I'm glad you're amused, 'cause I'm not!"


"Ok ok." She conceded hearing the pain and seriousness in his voice. "I'm sorry, I just need you to do one thing for me please."

"What?! What more could you possibly want from me now?!" Brian wondered as his stomach finally started to settle a bit.

"Could you please just tell me what day it is?" She asked thinking that the answer would make everything alright again.

"You mean what should have been one of the best days of my life turning into the worse day of my life, You mean this day? This God forsaken day?"

"Yes this day baby." She heard herself struggling to get the words out as her eyes filled with tears from guilt. She could hear and feel his pain. She had went too far. "What's the date baby?"

"What difference does it make? And stop calling me baby! I'm not your fuckin' baby!"

"Please just tell me." She was the one pleading now

"It's the first, so what?"

"Yes! The first of what?" She questioned and she eagerly waited for his answer.

After what felt like forever to Abby she finally heard him say "April."

"Yes. Don't you see?" She asked starting to feel relieved. "It's me Abby. April fools baby!" Nothing followed just awkward silence. "Brian? Baby? Did you hear me?" Her pleading voice questioned. "It was just a stupid April fools prank, I took it too far, I'm sorry! I love you Brian with all my heart and I want to spend the rest of my life with you and that was the most amazing sex I have ever had in my life. Yes, yes, yes I will marry you!" She confessed through her cascading tears. She fell to the floor with her back against the bathroom door sobbing in her hands. All she could do now was sit and wait for a response.

"You know these beautiful Louboutin's you love so much? Instead of red bottoms you can call them brown tops now." Brian finally stated laughingly after making her wait for his reply.

"What?" Abby asked confused.

"And by the way, I don't recall ever asking you to marry me."

"I know but you're still gonna ask me, right...right?"

"No! And I'm glad you enjoyed the sex, 'cause that was the last time for you. We're done!"

"WHAT!!! WAIT! NO, NO, NO you can't mean that!" She screamed pleadingly. "BRIAN PLEEAASEEE I'm so SORRY! Forgive me...." Abby sat there waiting to hear APRIL FOOLS!...............it never came.


Writing Prompt
Write about an April fools prank that goes terribly wrong. Sex/language/religion/politics/violence are permitted. Fiction or nonfiction, 1000 words max.

April F***s!
Contest Winner


This started as a use this sentence writing prompt entry but morphed into the April F***S entry, this was originally a longer story, however when I decided to enter it into this contest, I had to shorten it to meet the 1000 max word requirement, so I split it into two parts. This is actually the second part - Too Far pt. 2(the conclusion). You can look for the first part - Too Far (the lead up
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