Spiritual Poetry posted March 12, 2022

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Haiku-esque in 25 syllables (gossamery ... clouds veil)

Elysian Fields*

by Mark D. R.

gossamery cumulous clouds veil
the distant horizon and western ocean 
where Heaven meets Earth

25 Syllable Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any type. But it must have exactly 25 syllables total.

*from internet search:

The Elysian Fields were, according to Homer, located on the western edge of the Earth by the stream of Okeanos. In the time of the Greek poet Hesiod, Elysium would also be known as the "Fortunate Isles," or the "Isles (or Islands) of the Blessed," located in the western ocean at the end of the earth.

Cumulous clouds or cumulus are summer cloud formations.

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