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Jack Collom's Lune 3/5/3 WORDS.

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Atticus Asks

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Atticus asked why
is the sun following us?
— To shine on!

 





"Remember when you were young, you shone like the sun. Shine on you crazy diamond ..." Pink Floyd

Picture: Atticus is my grandson, a very inquisitive boy. LoL

LUNE is a short poem with three lines, similar to haiku in that it uses imagery and succinct composition. Lune poetry originated when American poets noticed that writing a haiku in The Lotus Flower grows deep in the muddy waters, far away from the sun. In time the Lotus reaches the light and transforms into a beautiful flower. It is regarded in many different cultures as a symbol of purity, enlightenment, self-regeneration and rebirth. English isn�¢??t the same as writing one in Japanese. Japanese words tend to have more syllables than English words and thus it forced English-language haiku to be too wordy and forced to fit the 5/7/5 syllables mold. American poet, Robert Kelly, created the lune in the 1960s. THE KELLY LUNE consists of 3/5/3 SYLLABLES. It was named after its shape, which resembles a crescent moon. Later, poet JACK COLLOM came up with the word-count-variant 3/5/3 WORDS.

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Gypsy

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