General Poetry posted January 25, 2022


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Philosophical Poem

Once upon a time

by royowen

Old age ...

(Youth))
My youth was full of self and pride ,
and on its wave my thoughts would ride.
I never knew that time would turn,
those pride-filled thoughts in fire would burn.

So why's old age the final joke?
Ironic fingers prod and poke.
The hand that pays will take your song,
and hang it on the that dark, stark prong.

In times gone by my youthful smirk,
in quietude would look and lurk.
Although some kindness hid in me,
my thoughts set not compassion free.

(Age))
But now I need a helping hand,
as goodness needs a change of brand,
Now youth still looks, and egos flaunt,
my helpless stance with pity, haunt.

When time for me at last runs out,
that once strong face my youth would flout,
I feel God's hand upon my frown,
His kindness fits compassion's crown.

R.Owen 24/02/2021



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January
2022


When I was young, I used to look upon old age as being something my firm flesh and good looking appearance would never reach. Live fast, die young, and leave a good looking corpse seemed right. But the years pass and life comes inevitably to that place that arrogance spurns.
Although I was raised to respect my elders? I still harboured those ill-advised thoughts

Leviticus 19:32

You shall stand up before the grey head and honour the face of an old man, and you shall fear your God, I Am the Lord.

Philippians 2:3 Do nothing from rivalry or conceit, but in humility count others more significant than yourself.

Thanks for reading. R.Owen
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