General Poetry posted January 22, 2022


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5/7/4 Ekphrastic Haiku for the Haiku Club Event

The Salmon Run

by Gypsy Blue Rose


for rules, please check my author notes


salmon shade sunset
framed in dreamy purple haze —
fish swim upstream






SALMON RUN --Salmon migrate from the ocean to the upper reaches of rivers where they spawn on gravel beds. After spawning, all Pacific salmon and most Atlantic salmon die, and the salmon life cycle starts over again.

HAIKU is an unrhymed Japanese poem that uses imagistic language to convey the essence of a human experience in nature. It uses a juxtaposition of two concrete images in a way that prompts the reader to make an insightful connection between the two. It alludes to a season of the year with direct words (summer, winter, autumn, spring) or not direct words (northern wind, warm breeze, harvest, Christmas, New Year, cherry blossoms, etc) The best haiku avoid the poet�???????????�??????????�?????????�????????�???????�??????�?????�????�???�??�?�¢??s ego and views. FORM Japanese haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) in English is 17 syllables OR LESS in any combination (3/5/3 - 2/7/6 - 5/6/5 - etc). AVOID punctuation, alliteration, metaphor, personification, and capital letters (proper names are okay). Haiku and other Japanese poetry don�???????????�??????????�?????????�????????�???????�??????�?????�????�???�??�?�¢??t need titles but in fanstory we have to have one. It can be anything that relates to the haiku. To pause before the satori you can use a dash, sometimes a comma is okay, but we keep punctuation to a minimum..
HAIKU SOURCES
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CLICK HERE TO READ Haiku Ten Tips
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CLICK HERE TO READ Haiku Society of America�???????????�??????????�?????????�????????�???????�??????�?????�????�???�??�?�¢??Haiku Examples
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CLICK HERE TO READHaiku Society of America�???????????�??????????�?????????�????????�???????�??????�?????�????�???�??�?�¢??Haiku Rules
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CLICK HERE TO READ Matsuo Basho Haiku Collection
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CLICK HERE TO READ Matsuo Basho History
Japanese Haiku lines may seem disconnected due to the Japanese to English translation. Matsuo Basho was one of the original haiku masters, considered to be the best haiku poet in the world.
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CLICK HERE TO READ why haiku can be less than 17 syllables
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CLICK HERE TO READ SEASON WORDS (Kigo) List
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*If you would like to join the Haiku Club, please click here and look for the haiku club* RESERVE A SPOT /SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY

Thank you very much for your review and your valuable time,
Gypsy

Club entry for the "EKPHRASTIC HAIKU" event in "HAIKU CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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