General Poetry posted January 19, 2022 Chapters:  ...175 176 -177- 178... 


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A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Cerulean Eruption

by Gypsy Blue Rose


below calm water,
cerulean eruption
punctures the surface 

 




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Hunga Tonga volcano eruption**The poem was inspired by recent events. An underwater volcano erupted on Saturday, January 15, 2022, near the remote Pacific nation of Tonga, triggering tsunami warnings across the Pacific and for the West Coast of the United States.

=A cerulean eruption, also called blue lava, is a phenomenon that occurs when sulfur burns. It is an electric-blue flame that has the illusory appearance of lava.

5/7/5 poem written in 3 lines with a 5/7/5 syllables pattern. The lines are connected grammatically and it doesn't rhyme. It's similar to haiku but has fewer rules.

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
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