General Poetry posted December 14, 2021


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A Kyrielle Sonnet

We Pledged Our Troth

by karenina

 

If truth wins out, as truth should do
this is a moment we'll get through;
and you'll confess that you did stray.
Our love will bloom as yesterday...

I saw her lean in for a kiss,
intent, I watched if you'd resist.
You did not flinch or pull away.
Our love will bloom as yesterday...

I have not treasured ev'ry vow
to see you thus surrender now.
She is, no doubt, a bright bouquet!
Our love will bloom as yesterday.
~~*~~
If truth wins out, as truth should do,
our love will bloom as yesterday.


 



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December
2021


A Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet). Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme for a Kyrielle Sonnet would be: AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB.

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