Romance Fiction posted December 7, 2021

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What happens behind a tree

Behind a Tree

by Goodadvicechan

Standing away from the graduation party, behind a tree, looking for Thomas, I wanted to tell him "I love him." I was hurt each time he told me he got lucky with a girl.

All of a sudden, someone behind tapped on my shoulder.

Thomas said, "Alan, there you are. Aren't you going to give me a hug?"

I held him tight and kissed him. He punched me, and blood came out from my nose.

75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry

Background: Thomas and Alan are neighbors and went to the same High school.
After graduation, both will go to separate colleges.

Feelings are hard to control...
Tempers are even hard to control...
Love cannot be controlled... It comes, it goes...
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