Writing Poetry posted November 5, 2021


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Drunk, Loud, Being Mean

Think We Can Get Lucky?

by country ranch writer

Jake: falls out of his car.

He's weaving as he stumbles towards the bar.

Sammy:she frequents the bar half drunk, she swings her hips as she almost trips

messing up her long blonde hair looking like a has been movie star.

Jim:says do you have to stare?

Jake slurs his words says, "she's standing right over there."

Jim:he does a double take!

The blonde was wearing a shirt cut into a v her boobs were almost bare
As they were about to fall out of there.


Jim's face is red as he sees her standing right there.

He says in a loud voice to Jake "I couldn't help but stare!"


Do you think Sammy's gonna share?

Jake bellows " I don't care!"picking up his chair.

Jim says: "put down that chair,"

Next you hear shots as the bar keeps shot gun barks.

As they laid dead on the floor the bar keep say to Sammy," they will not bother you no
The bar tenders drunk daughte slurs her words saying 'they were just fans."



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