General Poetry posted October 13, 2021


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Sedoka 5/7/7 5/7/7

Wonder Years

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 


intermittently —
little scientist watches plants'
leaves follow the warm sunlight
from one day to next
with innocent wonderment —
ahhh … to be a child again!



 

 




SEDOKA is a Japanese unrhymed poem made up of two three-line poems with the following syllable counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7. A Sedoka pair may address the same subject from differing perspectives or separate topics. It's an old form. more information about Sedoka and Katauta

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