Family Flash Fiction posted October 11, 2021


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Feeling grief that never leaves

Unfathomable Loss

by Toni Newell

She looked out across the waves to the horizon. She felt her stomach tighten as she thought about her husband. His death had come as a complete shock. She had suspected nothing. Suicide was so cruel, too many questions. Their last day together reverberated in her head, a tear escaped.



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