Satire Poetry posted October 7, 2021

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A Self Satirical Senryu

When the Typing Stops

by AliMom

Senryu Yourself Contest Winner 
Contemplative pauses 
actually mean
I’ve fallen a


Writing Prompt
Here is a chance to get to know some of your fellow Fanstorians! Who's brave enough to use satire or irony against yourself? Use 17 syllables OR LESS, as long as it follows a short/long/short format (defined by counting syllables).

Senryu Yourself
Contest Winner

I wish my brain worked half as well in my half-asleep state where everything is relaxed and everything seems possible. The simple act of finding a pen and paper or opening a laptop can sometimes jiggle the finest thoughts right out of my head. This is the first time I've tried one of these.
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