Spiritual Fiction posted July 26, 2021


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Believer

True believer

by Iza Deleanu


"Give me your hand, so I can write down hope."

"You can use your own, or you don't want to get some carpel tunnel?"

"No! It's more romantic with your hand."

"No, it's reumatic, not romantic, can't you see? I am already in pain and wearing this tight bandage to keep the bonnes in place, it's not helping."

"Give me your hand, I want to show you the world."

How can you do that, when I am blind?"

"I will described it to you..."

"Then you don't need my hand, but my ears and my mind so I can see feel the colors with my soul."

"Child, give me your hand and open your eyes, you've been healed."

"Father, thank you for the gift of life and for erasing my pain. Here, take my hand and show me your world."



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