General Poetry posted July 21, 2021


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Sedoka poem: 5/7/7, 5/7/7

Sandcastle

by Jill McCauslin

Red-headed boy builds
and decorates his castle
complete with ramparts and moat.
 
Waves curl over sand,
shells, the red plastic bucket.
Castle falls into the sea.
 

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A sedoka is made up of two poems or stanzas (each with the 5/7/7 format) that can address the same subject from different perspectives.
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