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5/7/3 Autumn Humanity Haiku

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Orange Fire Daisies

by Gypsy Blue Rose


for rules, please check my author notes


 

orange fire daisies

on her fawn-shade kimono —

harvest moon

 




 




Fawn is a shade of beige. Fire is a shade of orange.

This week we are learning about HUMANITY HAIKU. click here to find the haiku club


KIGO: harvest moon for autumn

Humanity Haiku category focuses on aspects of human beings. It's not to be confused with Senryu which doesn't have a kigo (season word) Humanity kigo list includes: clothes; food and beverages; work and school; sports; recreation; the arts; illness; travel; communications; and moods. click here to see List of Kigo

HAIKU is a Japanese short poem that uses imagistic language to convey the essence of an experience of nature intuitively linked to the human condition. FORM: In Japanese, haiku is written in three lines 5/7/5. In English, it's 17 syllables or less, as brief as possible.

The essence of haiku is represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas separated by a dash to pause for introspection, usually at end of the second line.

source of 5/7/5 syllables rule ***
source haiku rules by William J. Higginson, Haiku Society of America *** HaikuWorld.org

My haiku was inspired by a painting by Otake Aya (Ekphrastic)

Thank you very much for your review and your valuable time,

Gypsy
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