General Fiction posted May 7, 2021


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True Story Flash: 100 words

My First Pull Up

by Jill McCauslin


I grabbed the bars over my head and tried to pull myself up. I felt myself move but nothing happened.

“Too bad. We’ll try again soon.” Steve, my trainer, sounded disappointed. We both thought I was ready after months of training.

“Let me try one more time.”

Steve looked doubtful.

I grabbed the bars and tightened my abs, thought about the muscles in my upper body, and began to lift. Suddenly I was above the bar.

Steve yelled, “You did it!” A couple men watching called, “Wow, Amazing! Congratulations!”

I lowered myself back to the ground, grinning. Success at last.

 



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I was 57 years old when I did my first pull up. I don't know why I set this as a goal but I worked hard to reach it. There aren't many women my age who can do a pull up and I was so proud of myself.
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