General Poetry posted April 20, 2021


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A 20 word poem about loss.

Today

by fm wright

You were here just yesterday,

now today you are gone.

My world was complete then,

now it's broken in two.



20 Word Poem contest entry


Though it could be about the loss of a spouse or lover, I wrote this about the disappearance of a beloved kitty. This was exactly how it came to me. I would welcome any changes that would keep the meaning yet improve its quality.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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