General Poetry posted March 19, 2021


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a love poem

twilight breezes

by judester

Love is that familiar smile, eyes that look like mine,
the comfort in kept promises, old memories defined.
Her familiar laughter, when I just need that lift,
sage advice that sets me right, when life foundations shift.

How calm and clear the twilight ~ melodic breezes weave
flying free through olive trees tossing playful leaves.
Blissful in her lofty spot, safe and peacefully
basking in the warmth of love, from her close family.

I bow my head thank the Lord every single day,
for my precious mother, in oh so many ways.

Maybe I don't listen but trust me I do hear,
every word of wisdom, her pride throughout the years.




















~ LOVE IS ~ writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
*Compose a RYMING poem (words at end of lines rhyme) for a REAL PERSON who is currently alive.
*Minimum Length 12 lines /Maximum Length 28 lines
*WORD COUNT in each line MUST BE BETWEEN 8 to 10 WORDS
*ONE color font / ONE color background
*Picture (or not) author's choice--any source (see note about picture)
*Author notes allowed ~ 2 sentences only, if desired
*Dedication, IF desired, may be added above text of poem (NOT IN the body of the poem) ~ does NOT count in total number of maximum lines

~ NO ~ NO ~ NO~
NO Sonnet or multiple sonnets, haiku suite, 575 suite [suite is more than 1 of the same style used to compose poem]
*NO animations, videos, music, or picture with ANY words on it
* NO warnings of ANY kind ~ keep poem clean
AT LEAST FIVE (5) ENTRIES MUST BE RECEIVED BEFORE VOTING BEGINS


Thanks to Angelheart for the artwork.
My mom has lots of time to reflect on her life and choices these days and I want her to know that she gets a gold medal from this judge.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by Angelheart at FanArtReview.com

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