General Poetry posted March 15, 2021


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One Drink and I'm Fine

by Raul1

I am secure with my drink,
by drinking alcohol I'm not crazy,
sometimes my head is fuzzy,
one drink and I'm fine.

I only drink one Budweiser,
it's not like I go like guns in blazing,
my mind thinks better,
I don't need a babysitter.

It's not like my partner is Bonnie
and I'm Clyde.
In real life, I never lied,
drinking too much makes you a liar,
but I feel more secure,
because of one drink.

It makes me more of an adult,
I'm able to be myself.
One drink makes me happy,
and it's enough for me.

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The Drink Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem. You (or your character) take a sip of a drink and feel different. What happens?


Bill drinks one Budweiser in this fiction poem and it's enough for him. I don't drink alcohol. I only drink ice coffee and that is about it. This is a fiction poem. I hope you enjoy it.
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