Romance Poetry posted March 3, 2021


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Romantic Haibun

Premeditation

by DonandVicki

On the evening of our wedding night, I watched in awe as my sweet wife took off her wedding dress. I swiftly slipped into the bathroom and told her that I would warm up a bath for her. I had a hibiscus flower hidden for the purpose. I carefully placed the flower into the warm bubble bath. My anticipation blossomed as my heart pounded inside my chest.


secretly I place
a hibiscus in her bath
premeditation



Haibun Poem contest entry

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#118
March
2021


This is a true story and I highly recommend this ploy for any man or woman that wants to get really close to his lover.
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