Romance Poetry posted February 21, 2021


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I Light a Candle

by June Sargent

I light a candle 'midst a thunderstorm,
sitting by the window near the old oak tree.
A crackling fire will keep me warm
as I pretend you're right here with me.

Sitting by the window near the old oak tree,
I still smell the grass where we stole our first kiss.
As I pretend you're right here with me -
Oh - how your caresses I have come to miss!

I still smell the grass where we stole our first kiss.
A crackling fire will keep me warm.
Oh - how your caresses I have come to miss -
I light a candle during a thunderstorm.



Use These Words writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any length or style using these words

Candle

Thunderstorm

Grass

Smell

Tree

Window



The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the second and fourth lines of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding quatrain; each quatrain introduces a new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. The first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing quatrain, and third line of the poem recurs as the second line of the closing quatrain, rhyming ZAZA.

The design is simple:

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4

Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
Line 6
Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
Line 8

Continue with as many stanzas as you wish, but the ending stanzathen repeats the second and fourth lines of the previous stanza (as its first and third lines), and also repeats the third line of the first stanza, as its second line, and the first line of the first stanza as its fourth. So the first line of the poem is also the last.
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