Satire Poetry posted January 21, 2021


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Once in a blood moon the tortoise wins.

The Race

by JLR

Most humans beings are in the race
trying to keep pace
with the ever changing moon.

But, running as hard as they try
to compete in and always comply
some will look upon the moon and swoon.
 
Those that do will slow down their pace.
Just intuit that a tortoise can save face
and beat the hare in his race and become the tycoon.

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2021


Picture this club challenge.

Presented Tercets with A/A/B end rhymes and an internal rhyme
Club entry for the "Blood Moon" event in "Picture This ".  Locate a writing club.
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