General Poetry posted December 27, 2020


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prisoners see this quite differently

The Toilet

by victortouche

Roses
lay sublimely
as they rest
in a toilet's
water test.

Why
do they
burst forth
with evolution's
bright light?

And unfold
with all a
leaf's seduction.

While we
maintain
an illusion
that prisoners
have resolved.

For toilet water
remains
that which
it is,

A basic level
we remain
too blind
to see.

A necessity
that
you and I
would crawl
to drink from.

The well
of humanity.



Recognized

#1677
2020


I worked in a prison.
Lived for a week in a prison.

They make coffee,
tea, from toilet
bowl water.

If you want respect,
if you desire
an interview...

you will drink.
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