General Poetry posted October 22, 2020


Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted
a hallowe'en poem

small blue ball

by judester

The grieving mother paced the halls, crying out in pain.
His red toy train left in the rain renewed her grief again.
She picked it up and threw it, bellowing his name,
out of the yard, she threw it hard, to ease her guilted shame.

A determined little boy ghost, caught between the realms
tried to send her happy signs, but she was overwhelmed.
With a sigh, her cherished guy picks up a small blue ball,
to her room, cast in gloom, he rolls it down the hall.









Traditional Ghost Story. writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a ghost story of any length, in a poem of any type. Let's celebrate Halloween!


Thanks to MoonWillow for the artwork.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by MoonWillow at FanArtReview.com

Save to Bookcase Promote This Share or Bookmark
Print It View Reviews

You need to login or register to write reviews. It's quick! We only ask four questions to new members.


© Copyright 2024. judester All rights reserved.
judester has granted FanStory.com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.