Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 16, 2020


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8-6 poem contest entry.

This Poem Sucks

by Raul1

The author has placed a warning on this post for language.
It is a dumb sucky poem.
It serves to no purpose,
watch your annoying dying tome,
written from a tortoise.

To you, it won't make any sense,
you will sure discard it,
it's written in some strange past tense,
it doesn't quite right fit.

I will rate it asleep zero,
don't bother writing that,
I want back my such "dinero",
this grade is an F flat.

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An 8-6 poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
First you need to pick one word of one syllable. The first line, which is 8 syllables does not need to rhyme, but set the premise for the second line. The second line fulfills the premise and the last one syllable word must rhyme with others. You can write as many lines as you want. Example
Line 1 Why in the world did god decide? 8 syllables.
Line 2 That we all needed lips. 6 syllables.
All line 2s must rhyme.


I hope that you enjoy my silly poem, even if it doesn't make any sense, or has no purpose at all. It is a funny poem. "Dinero" is called Money in Spanish.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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